the first multidraft conference.. taht we had... the other day!

The first multidraft went well. I got positive and negative feedback. But positive too and thats whats important!

I liked the positive feedback. made me feel good about myself. thanks you guys :D

and you mrs srpouls! <3

Everything is basically fair because its a rough draft and it needs people to pick out any problems with it.

Everything i was told was very helpful and i hope i took everythinbng into the correct consideration while revising myself.

Envisage?!!?!?

Im not sure of what my final career in life is going to be. But! going to stockton, or any other college/university, is going to help me decide what i want to do because i can take waht classes i want to take and i have a much wider schedule for classes.. like the whole day.. Regardless of what classes are taken, being in college and taking classes furthers the maturing and that will help decide what career to choose in life.

Although i have many ideas, i need to continue my studies and decide on one soon.. because i dont have the money to be taking pointless classes.

THE PROFIT BARBRA ENGITHT!!!

Listen, Barbara is just like a house cat thats been locked out the house while the owners went out for a few days.

She just has to get used to being outside and she will find friends who are like her that she can play with and stay with until her owners return.

She might get drunk on a bowl of milk and sing a tune or two but unlike the other cats doing the same thing, she has a place to return to and a fairly well paying job waiting on her return.

Basically, she needs to calm down and get it done. she knows theres a kijillion people who are actually living and have been living on minimum wage and if they can do it than she can too. SHUT UP BARBARA AND QUIT YOUR YAPPIN!!!

PARENTS WORKING!!!

My mom is a secretary for a lawyer. She does basically everything for her boss and tries to keep things organized and in order. At home she also tries to keep things clean and organized but with four kids and my dad its not always easy. But seeing as she works as a secretary and all its pretty easy to tell that she likes things to be kindof neat and in order. So i can see taht a career becomes part of a persons identity.

Work

Scrubs is an amazing show that revolves around the medical field. The Main characters are two dudes who are the best of friends and i love watching Jd and Turk do funny things together. Their like two kids... or just two stupid grown up men... BUT STILL!! I stand by my statement.

Scrubs doesnt just revolve around the characters JD and Turk. There entire medical ward seems to have a part in the show which feels like its legit medicalness!!!! As you watch the show you get to see the characters mature. Turk gets married to his gf and JD goes in and out of relationships. Its not always sunny in the show tho. sometiems they cant save people and sometiems everyone hates eachother. Its like being in an actual hospital. Its all good clean american televisiion and its alllllllll good. YEAH FOR SCRUBS!